{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"10522270","dateCreated":"1237999634","smartDate":"Mar 25, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"KevinEldred","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/KevinEldred","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1231298110\/KevinEldred-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/stimulus370.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/10522270"},"dateDigested":1531976678,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback","description":"I spoke with Tarek about my feedback yesterday but, basically, the main issue here is that you do not have a developed thesis. What is your actual argument going to be, and how are you going to argue it? You should focus on specific visual elements of a persistent online world and make your argument 'work' by comparing and contrasting these visual features with features of a real environment of some kind.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nAlso, note that the form of the presentation should focus on sensory representations and other forms of engagement. Written text should be used for support primarily. This is so that other groups will feel inclined to look at and review eachother's work (and no one is going to do that if it involves reading a lot of text).<br \/>\n<br \/>\nKevin","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}